小作文(通知类,10分)
题目要求:
某高校研究生会拟举办“英语学习经验交流会”,请以秘书处名义写一份通知,内容包括:时间(2018年10月15日14:00-16:00)、地点(教学楼301)、主讲人(李教授)、报名方式(扫描二维码)及截止日期(10月10日)。
高分范文(节选):
Dear fellow students,
To enhance your English proficiency and share effective learning strategies, the Graduate Student Union is pleased to host an English Learning Experience Sharing Session on October 15, 2018 (Monday), from 14:00 to 16:00, at Room 301, Teaching Building.
Professor Li, a renowned applied linguist with 15 years of teaching experience, will deliver a compelling presentation on evidence-based techniques for reading comprehension and writing coherence.
Please register via QR code by October 10 to secure your seat. Limited spots available—first come, first served!
We look forward to your active participation.
得分亮点:
- 标题规范:《关于举办英语学习经验交流会的通知》(符合中文通知格式);
- 要素齐全:时间、地点、人物、事件、要求五要素无遗漏;
- 语气得体:使用“pleased to host”“look forward to”等礼貌表达;
- 格式严谨:分段清晰,结尾署名“Graduate Student Union, Secretariat”完整。
大作文(议论文,25分)
题目:
Write an essay of 160-200 words on the following topic:
Should governments invest more in renewable energy?
In your essay, include:
1) Your stance (agree/disagree/mixed);
2) Two supporting arguments;
3) A conclusion.
高分范文(节选):
Governments should indeed prioritize increased investment in renewable energy—not merely as an environmental imperative, but as a strategic economic decision. First, the falling costs of solar and wind technologies have made renewables increasingly cost-competitive with fossil fuels; in 2018, the levelized cost of electricity (LCOE) for utility-scale solar dropped 27% year-on-year, according to IRENA. Second, early investment de-risks private sector participation: Germany’s Energiewende policy, launched in 2000, catalyzed a 10-fold increase in renewable jobs, proving that public funding crowds-in private capital rather than replacing it.
Critics may argue that renewable subsidies strain public budgets. However, this overlooks the long-term savings: the IMF estimates that fossil fuel subsidies cost the global economy $5.3 trillion annually in health and environmental damages. By redirecting these distortive subsidies toward clean energy, governments can achieve fiscal sustainability while advancing climate goals.
得分关键:
- 立场明确:首段即表明“should invest more”,避免模棱两可;
- 论证有力:用具体数据(27%、$5.3 trillion)增强说服力;
- 结构完整:四段式(引言+论点1+论点2+让步反驳+结论);
- 语言精准:使用“de-risks”“crowds-in”“levelized cost”等学术词汇,体现高阶表达能力。
据阅卷组反馈,2018年大作文平均得分14.2/25,高分作文(22+)普遍具备两大特征:
① 数据真实可溯源(如“IRENA 2018 Report”);
② 反驳段设计精巧(不回避反方观点,而是转化为己方论据)。