【小作文核心规范】
✅ 格式零失误:倡议书需含标题(如“Call for Energy-Saving Actions”)、称呼(“Dear fellow students,”)、正文、结尾(“Yours sincerely,”)、署名(“Li Ming”)
✅ 目的清晰:首段点明目的——“to encourage participation in our campus energy-saving campaign”
✅ 内容完整:①背景简述 ②活动内容(时间/地点/形式)③参与意义 ④呼吁行动
❌ 高频扣分项:称呼漏写(扣1分)、结尾格式错误(扣0.5分)、未体现倡议书“号召性”语气(扣1-2分)
【大作文三段式模板】
第一段(描述图表):
“The bar chart illustrates the changes in the percentage of college students participating in volunteer services from 2018 to 2022. As is clearly shown, participation rose steadily from 62.4% to 78.1%, with the most significant increase occurring between 2020 and 2021.”
第二段(分析原因):
“Several factors may account for this trend. First, the nationwide promotion of socialist core values has enhanced students’ sense of social responsibility. Second, universities have expanded volunteer platforms, such as online registration systems and community partnership programs. Third, the pandemic in 2020-2021 heightened awareness of public service, prompting more students to engage in epidemic control volunteer work.”
第三段(评论展望):
“In my view, this positive trend reflects a growing civic consciousness among the youth. It is hoped that such initiatives will be further supported by policy incentives and institutional resources, ensuring that volunteerism becomes an integral part of higher education.”
高分加分项:
① 使用“as is clearly shown”“It is hoped that”等正式表达
② 数据精确(保留小数点后1位)
③ 原因分析分层(First/Second/Third)
④ 结尾升华(civic consciousness, integral part of education)